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Offline Steve_uk

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« Reply #240 on: August 11, 2013, 03:39:PM »
Stop talking about me as if I'm not here. My teaching certificate entitles me to teach all National Curriculum subjects and we'll just leave it at that.

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« Reply #241 on: August 11, 2013, 03:49:PM »
lookout stop talking about steve as if he's not here ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #242 on: August 11, 2013, 04:02:PM »
lookout stop talking about steve as if he's not here ;D ;D ;D
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D xxxx

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« Reply #243 on: August 11, 2013, 04:30:PM »
..and if you don't like the last sentence of #190 then I'm sorry,my work doesn't get any better..

You mean this one?

" Was the backspatter the source of the blood as Jeremy crept into the twins room like a cat and pumped five shots into one body and three in the other,as one infant was sucking his thumb as surrogate,he too feeling the lovelessness of this Georgian edifice as Jeremy had done himself of yesteryear,but who now no longer questioned,who no longer cared, but vowed to be hands-on,the master of his own destiny,whilst the tractor could rust among the coarse barley bristles and Jeremy felt only freedom,freedom, as he pedalled along the sea wall,feeling only the fresh ,cool salt wind against the contours of his face.."

Bit long isn't it? Almost suffocated reading it - must try harder I'd say!! :)
« Last Edit: August 12, 2013, 06:42:PM by Caroline »

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« Reply #244 on: August 11, 2013, 04:36:PM »
Stop talking about me as if I'm not here. My teaching certificate entitles me to teach all National Curriculum subjects and we'll just leave it at that.




Sorry,Steve,,I thought you'd gone,,which is usual for you when we're talking about you.

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« Reply #245 on: August 11, 2013, 04:42:PM »
Hello Caroline  were you by any chance taught by steve.  Good thing april is not on. ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #246 on: August 11, 2013, 05:08:PM »
Stop talking about me as if I'm not here. My teaching certificate entitles me to teach all National Curriculum subjects and we'll just leave it at that.




Don't be shy,Steve.I like hearing about peoples' achievements.

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« Reply #247 on: August 11, 2013, 05:10:PM »
lookout  I knew steve was very clever whoops doing it again sorry steve I knew you were very clever ;D phew that was lucky he's gone ;D
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« Reply #248 on: August 11, 2013, 06:32:PM »
Hello Caroline  were you by any chance taught by steve.  Good thing april is not on. ;D ;D ;D

Maybe? If he ever taught in the Durham area, who knows?? It might explain a lot!!  ;D ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #249 on: August 12, 2013, 11:12:AM »
Maybe Steve UK you qualified in teaching, but in the event opted for a career change - I.e. Chief. sh-t  Stirrer?

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« Reply #250 on: August 12, 2013, 02:09:PM »
That could only be a comment from Campion Senior lol. I hope you are well x

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« Reply #251 on: August 12, 2013, 02:37:PM »
Thanks Tyler, I shall feel better for a reply from you regarding my post #326 in Topic -Sheila's Birth Family.
In all probability I am not alone in be ing som e what miffed by the volte face of the enquiries.
BTW are you still visiting Mr Spivey. It was surely a scoop to get hold of THE pics!

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« Reply #252 on: August 12, 2013, 06:11:PM »
You mean this one?

" Was the backspatter the source of the blood as Jeremy crept into the twins room like a cat and pumped five shots into one body and three in the other,as one infant was sucking his thumb as surrogate,he too feeling the lovelessness of this Georgian edifice as Jeremy had done himself of yesteryear,but who now no longer questioned,who no longer cared, but vowed to be hands-on,the master of his own destiny,whilst the tractor could rust among the coarse barley bristles and Jeremy felt only freedom,freedom, as he pedalled along the sea wall,feeling only the fresh ,cool salt wind against the contours of his face.."

Bit long isn't it? Almost suffocated reading it - must try harder I'd say!! :)
;D ;D ;D ;D Hahahahahahaheheheh. Sorry but I just had to laugh at Steve's novel writing. He probably teaches English literature by the way he's written that paragraph. ;D ;D ;D
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« Reply #253 on: August 12, 2013, 06:18:PM »
;D ;D ;D ;D Hahahahahahaheheheh. Sorry but I just had to laugh at Steve's novel writing ;D ;D ;D



Dear Lugg, if you see Steve's approach to/style of writing as "novel" I believe that laughing may well be the best course of action. Hehehehehehehehah ;D ;D ;D ;D

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« Reply #254 on: August 12, 2013, 06:38:PM »
;D ;D ;D ;D Hahahahahahaheheheh. Sorry but I just had to laugh at Steve's novel writing. He probably teaches English literature by the way he's written that paragraph. ;D ;D ;D
I agree Lugg, it's priceless.  ;D ;D